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Hurting You Killing Me

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Hurting You Killing Me

Hold onto your tears my dear,
Don't cry for me today,
Hold out for tears of joy.
Smiling, Happy, Coy.
This hurt you must destroy.

Keep any love you feel
Close to your heart let it lie
Cherish thoughts that are pure
Allow happiness to never die
That can be the only cure.

Please,
For you, for me.
Don't step into the sea, a darkness to never end.
For with that, my heart you would bend.

Keep my vital organ intact,
I cannot live without this beating vessel,
It cannot work without your smile.

So awaken the sun,
Allow my heart to beat once more.
You can have my love
If only you back away from the edge of despair.

I Truly Deeply Care
My first DeviantArt submission!
I hope you guys read this one and give me some feedback!
I know there's alot of very intelligent individuals in this community and getting advice from you guys can only be a good thing!

It's really an exploration of the pain and suffering someone can cause to those close to them. Often times its those who are close to us who suffer most from our actions. As always, the interpretation is up to the reader!

Thanks, and I hope you enjoy it.
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DarkForceWolf's avatar
Very well writtin, relates to how I have once felt, VERY good